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Gravitation, vols. 1-5 (Maki Murakami)

This is a deeply silly series. In fact, it was inspiring me to filk (to the tune of the Beatles' "Paperback Writer"): "It's a silly story 'bout a silly band, and the writer dude doesn't understand ... ."

High school senior Shuichi Shindo, 18, has a great singing voice, delusions of song-writing ability, and a minimal talent for playing the keyboards. He and his sweet, long-suffering best friend and guitarist Hiroshi Nakano make up the pop band Bad Luck, which plays mostly at high school events. One night, he's taking a shortcut through a park when he drops the lyrics to a love song. As the paper blows away, it's picked up by a handsome foreign-looking man who reads it and tells Shuichi that it's utter drivel. Shuichi becomes obsessed with this guy, who turns out to be a popular romance novelist who goes by the nom de plume of Eiri Yuki. Although Yuki seems to despise Shuichi as well as his songwriting, he shows a remarkable tolerance for having his home invaded regularly by the lovestruck teen, and eventually they become lovers. Meanwhile, Shuichi and Hiroshi get a couple of lucky breaks, leading to a contract for Bad Luck. Soon Shuichi and Yuki are up to their necks in a series of ridiculous but fairly entertaining soap opera plots, involving rivalry among bands and singers, family obligations, revenge, and more.

The fact that this series doesn't take itself very seriously keeps me from wanted to kick it to the curb (as Shuichi keeps imagining Yuki will do to him), and every once in a while something with a bit of emotional punch happens. The "what in the world will they get up to next?" factor is strong enough that I'll keep reading it for now. The fact that Yuki is only 22 (when did he start writing, anyway?) keeps the squick factor about the relationship to a minimum.

Gravitation, vols. 1-5 (review)

I have to say that, given the silliness of most of the book, Taki's revenge plots take an awfully sinister turn. The gang rape of Shuichi and its aftermath do give the story more of an edge, but it's sort of icky that things have to go that far to get the reader (this reader, at least) emotionally invested in the story. Given the seriousness of this incident, and Hiroshi's and Yuki's reactions to it , it's sort of jarring that Taki proceeds to turn into the Wiley Coyote of the series: who needs a new villain when Taki can be scraped off the road one more time to take another crack at Shuichi? Then there's the whole issue of Yuki's past crimes ... I'm sure he'll turn out to have a good reason for what he did, but the whole subject is tossed around so lightly, and in the middle of so much other fluff, that I'm simply not worried about it.

The drawing style is rather sloppy ... this is perhaps the first manga I've seen where I find myself thinking "hmmm, you know, I could draw at least that well." It wouldn't matter except that it gets very, very hard to tell the characters apart. In particular, I keep getting Yuki mixed up with Tohma Seguchi, the producer, and the Young Lady says she gets Yuki's sister Mika (who is married to Seguchi ... did I mention that this whole thing is very incestuous? Everyone is related to or used to work with everyone else, it seems ...) mixed up with Noriko, the keyboard player that's brought in to fill out Bad Luck's roster.

Shuichi is a complete airhead, and very girly on the personality level. I suppose it's indicative of Yuki's eventual return crush on him that he puts up with Shuichi's babbling. The degree to which this boy gets flipped out by the idea of real sex strikes me as a bit silly. I have a feeling that what may be going on with me here is that this is, I think, my first encounter with the stereotypical seme/uke relationship (and I'd welcome comments about this issue). Some of the stuff I've read about the series online says that things are different in Gravitation because it's Shuichi who's actively pursuing the relationship, but to me, that's just window-dressing. He's fluffy and passive when things get physical, and does some very girly passive-aggressive stuff with Yuki. I did like it when Yuki laid out all the things he'd done for Shuichi that should have indicated how much he cares - but what's funny about is that it's the typical male/female communications issue: she (or in this case, Shuichi) wants elaborate confessions of love, verbally, wereas he (Yuki) is expressing his love by what he does, not what he says. I also can't figure out why they keep saying that Shuichi isn't really gay. I wonder if that's a mistranslation, and what is meant is that he's not just seeking out gay sex for the sake of sex.

The character I like the most is Hiroshi, who is a really good, kind person. He's secure enough with his own straight sexuality to joke around outrageously with Shuichi in public to entertain their fangirls and to discourage Shuichi without overreacting when Shuichi starts to come on to him a bit (example: the whole thing about how nice Hiroshi's hair smells when Shuichi is riding behind him on the bike). He's also really good and effective when Shuichi is attacked.

I'm curious enough about how it all works out to keep reading, even though parts of it aggravate me.

One last thought: the Young Lady loves this series, and tends to laugh aloud a great deal while reading it.


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Oct. 29th, 2007 11:55 pm (UTC)
The drawing style is rather sloppy ... this is perhaps the first manga I've seen where I find myself thinking "hmmm, you know, I could draw at least that well."

This is because(as far as I know) you have been very carefully guided in your manga reading so far...
Oct. 29th, 2007 11:58 pm (UTC)

You're probably right! But as with science fiction and fantasy, I'm unlike to read manga that were not recommended to me by somebody whose opinion I value.

So what about the other things I brought up? Is this actually the first time I've run across the classic seme/uke set-up, or have ˆ just missed it elsewhere?

Oct. 30th, 2007 12:03 am (UTC)
As far as I know, yup,first time you've come across it where it was canon.

(I actually did try reading this very, very early in my manga reading days-before encountering the rabid yaoi fangirls that give me most of my annoyance w/ the genre-but didn't care much for it. IIRC, I thought both guys could use a punch in the face, but for differeing reasons.)
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Oct. 30th, 2007 12:48 am (UTC)
I'm not crazy about Gravitation, mainly because I find super genki boys to be annoying. Shuichi is even worse in the anime, making me want to yell "Sit down, be quiet, and for god's sake, grow up" at him.
Oct. 30th, 2007 01:45 am (UTC)

Hmmm ... I would blame it all on age, or at least perceived mental age, but I have a feeling it's not that simple. People have described Yukimura as genki too, but in his case, it's only the face the he shows to the world. And I have a feeling that's part of my problem with it. Yes, the Saiyuki boys' problems are way over the top, but at least they give some reason for the guys' dysfunctional behavior.

I think that's part of the issue for me: the main sources of the problems are miscommunication, unequal expectations, and social climbing (in this case, status = popularity instead of class). Shuichi's family may be disappointed in him, but they love him. Yuki's family may be rigid in their expectations, but his encounters with them are really pretty mild as such things go, and he's no longer dependent on them, anyway. All of the threats to the protagonists' happiness are so trivial. Given the girls' reactions to Shuichi and Hiroshi's playacting, why is everyone so convinced that revelations of a gay relationship will sink Yuki's career?

This is why the whole rape scene and its aftermath were so jarring: in contrast to everything else that's been happening, here's something that could really mess up someone's life. And Shuichi more or less rolls with it, once Yuki has proved his love by stepping in. So in the end, it's as trivial as everything else.

There is a certain amusement, however, in the over-the-topness of it all. It's actually more fun when it's being totally fluffy - which is odd, because some of the serious scenes are done with a moderately effective sensitivity. I guess the mixture just doesn't work for me.

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Oct. 30th, 2007 01:06 am (UTC)
I remember watching some of the Gravitation anime, just so I could say that I saw it. I ended up ranting a lot about it, but I'm sort of glad I watched it instead of reading the manga, because at least I could tell people apart. Maybe it was the hair colours--I don't know.

I can't see Shuichi ever having sex.

Only thing good about this series: K. I remember liking Suguru, too. All the secondary characters made me happy.
Oct. 30th, 2007 01:50 am (UTC)

Yeah, K is fun. And besides that, his hairstyle makes him easy to tell apart from other people!

I keep wanting to hear about Hiroshi's social life instead. (And man is it tempting to think in slash terms ... I mean, Hiroshi knows how to handle Shuichi much better than Yuki does. But you're right about Shuichi, and I think Hiroshi deserves a partner who could go for it with gusto!)

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Oct. 30th, 2007 03:14 am (UTC)
I basically agree with you about the series; I enjoyed it when I first read it, early in my manga-reading career, but it's fluffy, and the non-fluffy bits are jarring.

The "I'm not gay" thing is probably not a translation error, but a very common trope. It means, gay men are men who are sexually attracted to men in general; I am not usually attracted to men, but I am really attracted to you, who happen to be a man; therefore, I'm not gay.

I think it's supposed to be romantic, like proof that they're really meant for each other. It's a trope I could live without.

Oct. 30th, 2007 09:10 pm (UTC)

Arrrgh, silliness about the gay attitudes ... in real world terms, it's more like "I didn't realize I was gay until I finally saw someone of the same sex who really floated my boat." Oh well ... it's not like these things are written with a gay audience in mind. But it would be nice, IMO, if there were some fluffy, funny manga with gay romantic situations that could actually be appreciated by both straight female and gay male teens ... . Maybe there are, and I just haven't hit them.

(I tend to see all these things through the lens of my friendship with a gay guy who didn't even begin to be comfortable with himself until halfway through college ... I always find myself thinking, "What would this have looked like to T. his first year at school?" It spoils a lot of fluff for me, but ... eh, it's worth it.)

Oct. 30th, 2007 11:56 pm (UTC)
No, there's actually a fair bit of manga in which either characters identify as gay rather than as men who have sex with men. You might try Antique Bakery or Takumi-Kun (which I did the English adaptation for, by the way.)

I do think the definition of "gay" differs from country to country and even from culture to culture, which is why HIV-prevention groups explicitly differentiate between "gay" and "men who have sex with men but don't identify as gay." Sometimes it means they're closeted, but sometimes I think it's different cultures having different ideas about sexual identity.
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Oct. 30th, 2007 03:14 am (UTC)
*laugh* As far as I'm concerned, the manga of Gravitation is just an intro for the author's very porny line of "Gravitation Remix" doujinshi. The story's kind of shallow and the art is kind of rough in the beginning (it gets better), but I read it for the humor. And the smut. Oh my god, the smut. (The mangaka was actually a guest at Otakon - she was hilarious. Her house is stocked with porn and an arsenal of model weapons.) Have you gotten to crazy gun-toting American K yet? He's my favorite. Hehe, I figured you'd like Hiro... but Hiro, straight?. Nobody in Gravitation is straight... In the Remixes (the canonicity of which is debatable, but if you think too hard about Gravitation canon, you'll give yourself a headache...), the author pairs him up with K, his brother Yuuji, and Shuuichi... all in the same volume, I think... o__O;;

I was fully prepared to HATE Yuki and the whole Yuki/Shuuichi pairing because Yuki was a real bastard in the anime and he had a lot less emotional depth. I actually rather enjoyed him in the manga, even if I did want to slap him around a bit and tell him to GET OVER IT. Shuuichi is... obnoxious, but he brings a lot of heart and manic humor to the series so I can look past the fact that he's basically a girl. And for a mainstream series, Gravitation really pushes some boundaries!
Oct. 30th, 2007 09:22 pm (UTC)

Well, the author is pretending Hiro's straight! I'm playing with her card deck right now ... heh, so maybe the doujinshi are why ipperne has so much fun with this (and that reminds me that I never got you to look at my un-smutty Saiyuyki doujinshi last time you were down). Yes, K. is fun. And he's easier to tell apart form the other characters ...   XD  

I guess being a best-selling author with legions of fan girls at 22 would tend to give a guy an attitude ... I can just see him coming on with typical male introvert abruptness in early interviews and having the interviewers characterize him as "brooding" and "wistful" and other positive things, so he'd start getting into it a little too much. In fact, taken in that light, Shuichi's influence begins to look almost positive ... .

Yes, there is a kind of emotional honesty to it - that may be why I don't feel like dropping it completely. Except for Taki, who really is just a cartoon (duh - well, of course) villain - if he had a mustache, he'd twirl it ... .

Oct. 31st, 2007 09:03 pm (UTC)

You know, after reading all the comments I'm kinda distracted. *goes back to read actual entry*
(btw; I am having much fun with remixes, yes^^)

An important thing to remember about Gravitation is that if it didn't have all the sillyness, the story wouldn't be able to cover so many taboos without disgusting most people. Eiri is actually a very tragic person, and almost everyone who loves (or only pretend to maybe) him, ends up hurting him in one way or another. And along comes Shuichi, not even caring about the fact that they are both men, but just loving him for who he is. Not that I will ever understand that, because I don't really like Eiri that much.

Thoma Seguchi is a big fat fake, and it does take a few more vols. for him to realize(well, sorta realize) that he isn't helping anyone by acting the way he does. Fujisaki (a prime example af the whole "everyone is related to someone one way or another"-deal)is a lot like Thoma, don't you think?

That drawing style will improve, but I think that already in the first vol. the general artwork is kinda just there, but all the frames with some emotional something are very well done, and I think it helps drawing attention to the main story, and makes readers forget the silliness for a second. The improvement mentioned above will be around vol. 7 or 8 I think. But especially in the sequel Gravitation EX there's a big difference.

A final note; K claims to be straight
Nov. 1st, 2007 07:55 pm (UTC)

>> An important thing to remember about Gravitation is that if it didn't have all the sillyness, the story wouldn't be able to cover so many taboos without disgusting most people.<<

Hmm, interesting point, and matches what sanada was saying. It also reminds me of how gay characters were first portrayed on U.S. TV, as asexual, idiosyncratic clowns, because that way they weren't threatening. But they paved the way for portrayals with slightly more depth.

Re Eiri - did you see what I was saying about him to sanada, above? He's still pretty young, and his personality has been helped by fame at an early age.

Nov. 1st, 2007 08:23 pm (UTC)
It's a point people usually forget about. But for a story that covers murderer, underage abuse, rape, violence, homosexuality, transsexuality, conspiracy, a high amount of bad morality, and so on it needs to have a rather large amout of odd things.

Heh, that description reminds me of Will & Grace, funny, but... very clowny.

Now, I can't remember when exactly it happens in the series, but do you know what happened to Eiri in New York when he was a child? It's impressive htat he can handle the fame actually. Well, handle it that well, because he's not handeling it that well after all...
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